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The sentences sag, or the argument is lost long before the end. Not because the thinking is weak, but because the writing got in the way.
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The sentences sag, or the argument is lost long before the end.
Not because the thinking is weak, but because the writing got in the way.
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The sentences sag, or the argument is lost long before the end. Not because the thinking is weak, but because the writing got in the way.
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Not because the thinking is weak, but because the writing got in the way.
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The sentences sag, or the argument is lost long before the end.
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