The poem "The Prayer unto the Saviour" by Sergey Dobrenkov appeared on Write Out Loud on 27 September 2026. It is presented as a short devotional lyric and was posted within a site that promotes poetry and devotional writing.
Dobrenkov's speaker makes a simple, repeated appeal: save me, Lord, by Thy grace alone. The opening line sets the theological and emotional frame: "Save me, my Saviour, by Thy Grace alone, / Not by the deeds my sinful hands have done." The speaker rejects any confidence in their own works and places dependence entirely on divine mercy.
- Grace over works. The poem repeatedly contrasts human insufficiency with divine mercy. The speaker disavows "the deeds my sinful hands have done" and appeals to grace.
- Surrender to divine will. The recurring formulation "as Thou wilt" and the lines that accept either light or darkness demonstrate a readiness to accept whatever the divine decree brings.
- Acceptance of mercy and judgment. The speaker offers praise both if mercy is granted and if judgment falls: "If Thou destroy me not with all my sin, / Glory to Thy mercy's boundless store! / If Thou condemn me for my sin within, / Glory to Thy righteous judgment evermore!"
- Binary spiritual imagery. The poem uses clear binaries—light/darkness, death/glory, mercy/judgment—to make its case. These contrasts are presented not as dilemmas to be resolved by the speaker, but as realities to be accepted in trust.
Read for tone and posture rather than theological argument. The poem's power lies in the speaker's posture of complete dependence and willingness to accept any outcome as consistent with God's character. Short, declarative lines and repeated phrases emphasize that posture.
- "Save me, my Saviour, by Thy Grace alone, / Not by the deeds my sinful hands have done."
The poem was posted alongside other devotional pieces and links to related devotional content on the site. Tags visible near the entry include single-word devotional markers such as "Darkness," "Death," "Glory," "God," and "Grace," which reinforce the poem's focus.
This is a short, devotional lyric of surrender. If you want a compact expression of reliance on divine grace and acceptance of divine judgment, the poem gives it in plain, unadorned lines. It asks the reader to consider a posture of dependence rather than self-reliance.